How my rap what do y'all think?

Im a monster but it ain't holloween one glance at me chicks have a wet dream damn my money strech longer than a limosine lames keep playing dey gon see dat red beam money is a hobby my cars like a lobby my wife mrs$ching-ching$ yeah dat ho slopy and im young meezy chicks be easy is you gonna play or is you gonna please me my flo too cold they say im like ice make it shine outside when it's twelve o clock at night you i gotta keep a heater when dudes get bold blow his brain out now his head miss his soul